- Choice > Try not to panick
Should be "panic"
- Isabelle > This is Morag-T. He's looking for
Use of male pronoun for female character. This is the first time I've seen this slip in well over 50 missions, so I know it's something you take great care about.
- their eyes steady the mines, beyond the gates
Missing preposition, should be "steady on the mines" or similar otherwise their eyes are keeping the mines steady.
Someone's been putting a lot of effort into writing these new missions - someone who thinks that Hemmingway's spare prose is for chumps. It has been noted. ;)
Re: TYPOS: Eyes of Iridium by StarGazer at 215.80/50:043 GCT
Thank you very much.
We'll check it and get it sorted!