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  1. Choice > Try not to panick

Should be "panic"

  1. Isabelle > This is Morag-T. He's looking for

Use of male pronoun for female character. This is the first time I've seen this slip in well over 50 missions, so I know it's something you take great care about.

  1. their eyes steady the mines, beyond the gates

Missing preposition, should be "steady on the mines" or similar otherwise their eyes are keeping the mines steady.

Someone's been putting a lot of effort into writing these new missions - someone who thinks that Hemmingway's spare prose is for chumps. It has been noted. ;)

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  1. Thank you very much.

    We'll check it and get it sorted!