Fareeha (Employment): "She waits with slightly baited breath for your answer." (should be "bated")
"Fareeha gives you vigorous hand shake..." (missing "a")
"...disappearing into mass of passersby..." (missing "the" or "a" or something like that)
Also, a logical inconsistency: Eda (Decommissoned Area): "Fareeha's posting here's only for one cycle, and it's nearly done... Six more tenspans is all..." A Cycle is ten tenspans, right? So if Fareeha has six left, then she's been here for only four and she isn't even half done, let alone "nearly done."